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Revise : the scholar-writer's essential guide to tweaking, editing, and perfecting your manuscript / Pamela Haag.

By: Material type: TextTextPublisher: New Haven : Yale University Press, [2021]Description: viii, 351 pages ; 23 cmISBN:
  • 9780300243673
  • 0300243677
Subject(s): Genre/Form: DDC classification:
  • 808.02 HAA
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Item type Current library Call number Status Date due Barcode
Standard Loan Moylish Library Main Collection 808.02 HAA (Browse shelf(Opens below)) Available 39002100604611

Enhanced descriptions from Syndetics:

Writing and revision are two different skills. Many scholar-writers have learned something about how to write, but fewer know how to read and revise their own writing, spot editorial issues, and transform a draft from passable to great. Drawing on before and after examples from more than a decade as a developmental editor of scholarly works, Pamela Haag tackles the most common challenges of scholarly writing. This book is packed with practical, user-friendly advice and is written with warmth, humor, sympathy, and flair.

With an inspiring passion for natural language, Haag demonstrates how to reconcile clarity with intellectual complexity. Designed to be an in-the-trenches desktop reference, this indispensable resource can help scholars develop a productive self-editing habit, advise their graduate and other students on style, and, ultimately, get their work published and praised.

Includes bibliographical references and index.

Table of contents provided by Syndetics

  • Introduction (p. 1)
  • 1 "Jargon-y, Theory-Heavy, and Obscure": Handling Specialized Language (p. 18)
  • 2 Stage-Setting, Recapping, and Forecasting: Reducing "Traffic Direction" and Procedural Language (p. 55)
  • 3 "Doesn't Flow"': Improving Sequencing and Organization (p. 83)
  • 4 "I've Been Struggling with Structure Since the Dissertation": Solving Structural Problems (p. 128)
  • 5 "Too Much Just Put There": Dealing with Source Material (p. 146)
  • 6 "Book Has No Through-Line": Tackling Common Thesis Problems (p. 177)
  • 7 "Length! A Huge Concern!": When a Manuscript Must (or Should) Be Shortened (p. 189)
  • 8 "Make It Readable": Revising Syntax and Sentence Construction (p. 206)
  • 9 "Awk": Finding Your Cadence, Tone, and Voice (p. 228)
  • 10 "Metaphors Gone Awry": Fine-Tuning Figurative Language (p. 253)
  • 11 "Needs Tightening and Strengthening": Clarifying Verbs, Subjects, and Objects (p. 272)
  • 12 "Bizarre Words and Flaky Diction": Replacing Inapt Words and Phrases (p. 286)
  • 13 When Others Identify Problems: Coping Productively with Criticism (p. 303)
  • A Note of Encouragement (p. 327)
  • The Style Audit (p. 329)
  • Works Cited (p. 337)
  • Acknowledgments (p. 341)
  • Index (p. 343)

Author notes provided by Syndetics

Pamela Haag, Ph.D., is an award-winning writer, essayist, cultural commentator, and historian. She has her own editorial business helping scholars and other nonfiction authors edit and revise their manuscripts.

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